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    19 January

    落叶(外一首)

     

     

     

    孤独  祖先馈赠的基因

    众多灵魂庇佑的森林

    雨水是久旱时的企盼

    雷电给它瞬间即逝的惊醒

     

    谁在意

    那经冬离枝的黄叶

    一片  一片

    如你  如我

    随风在南方大陆飘落

    在海波轻摇的岸边歌吟

     

    孤独  假如不是你我的通病

    谁珍惜诗人抗争命运的悲情

    人性萎缩于贪婪的冰川

    寒潮正吞噬“末世”的森林

     

    (原载澳洲《新快报》副刊)

                     

      

     

     

    天天看海

    脚步时紧时缓

    小路如细长的蛛丝

    随时都会踹断

     

    波涛是大海的浪子

    红蜻蜓栖息在礁石上

    鸥鸟沿着堤岸飞旋

     

    人生是一次逆旅

    你我相逢纯属偶然

    眼与眼对视

    惊喜中不无遗憾

     

    无所企冀,

    也无所失望

    海滨黄昏飘洒一路怡然

     

    2005-1-3/1-18改写于悉尼筱园

    (原载澳洲《新快报》副刊)

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    阡陌 wrote:
    一路的风景,诉不尽的孤寂,锻造简约的诗句,只道出,淡淡的闲愁......
    26 Jan.
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    定与不定之间-------快乐的饭饭 wrote:
    今天是小年,刚才在线同学说的,"小年快了".
    22 Jan.
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    空空雾 wrote:
    今日要出差,向冰夫先生报一声,回来后会经常拜读大作的。

    《落叶》(外一首)与《小路》两首诗读来,很贴切生活中的景象。对于雾,很多东东虽然与冰夫先生所感受的,已经物是人非了,但诗人境地的情感依然丰富、依然深深地感染者雾已经死去的灵魂。

    很多时候,人对生命的感动是最悲悯、最美好向往的,但如果那样的浇着铁锈的熔岩,因为另一地壳运动的作用,把如冰夫先生的梦全给改变了,冰夫也只能作出被熔岩流过后的感动,所有的,看似不经意的,恰是这不经意的,正是诗人内心最苦难最悲悯地感动情怀!

    健康长寿!
    22 Jan.
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    夏の伊始 wrote:
    海滨黄昏飘洒一路怡然
    22 Jan.
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    21 Jan.
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    爱心妈妈 wrote:
    冰夫老师,您好!
    提前给您拜年了,祝您春节愉快!
    身体的关系,我想休息一段时间,把我的网页关了。
    我还会回来看望您。
    20 Jan.
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    老妖 wrote:
    惟有钦佩!
    20 Jan.
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    清秋红叶1 wrote:
    孤独也是一种美丽~~
    20 Jan.
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    一无所有向世界 wrote:
    少年识得冰夫墨,读一掠风落。伫听天声,云啸啼拓。
    缘来中年才知,但有音,却已来过。留言予先生,敢请宁为客?
    (谢谢先生来我的小屋,此作)
    祝福你快乐一生。
    20 Jan.

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