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    November 08

    梦归

    不寐的深夜   静听
    月儿游过苍穹碧波
    浸透这雨扰残荷的秋思
    方知北国是那么遥远
    坐在始皇帝巡幸的碑碣下
    你我曾相约   相约
      或枇杷黄时
      或钱塘潮起
    携手回归江南
     
    一年空有四季
    年年未能如期
    命运的风曾反复驱赶
    我们像一只陀螺   旋转
    如今淡月如水
    不寐的我   抚额角寒霜
    遂想起   你青青的坟
    在碧螺峰下
    梅子林中

     

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    不寐的深夜 静听
    月儿游过苍穹碧波
    浸透这雨扰残荷的秋思....

    好美的诗!

    也曾填过一首词"心闲听荷语,风摇几点绿..."

    不同的经历,不同的境界.先生笔下的月与荷如黑白泼墨画,隽永、飘逸而富于变化...
    Apr. 12
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    夏の伊始 wrote:
    好美的诗!
    不寐的深夜 静听
    月儿游过苍穹碧波

    是多么空灵而飘逸的想象……随着这样的意境,随您走入月光荡漾的秋夜,思念,寸寸萦绕心肠。

    “不寐的我 抚额角寒霜
    遂想起 你青青的坟
    在碧螺峰下
    梅子林中”

    这结尾多么像苏轼的那首《江城子》“料得年年肠断处,明月夜,短松岗”。
    引人遐思,景为情动,深深倦遣,徘徊不去!
    Dec. 11
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    Zhenduo1 wrote:
    月光如水,残荷秋叶,惆怅缠绵,离愁乡思,挥之不去!
    Nov. 8

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